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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 18, 2004 17:38:59 GMT -5
'three years your just gonna throw away three years what the hell has she done to desrve that matt you can be so stupid sometimes' came the voice of james 'its not what shes done its what ive done' 'matt i cant believe you' 'hey guys whats all the shoutin about' yelled charlie 'matts gonna finish with susan' 'what matt you cant youu mean everything to her' yelled charile 'but ive gone behind her back and got another girl pregnant' 'but shes pregnant with your kid aswell you cant just leave her' replied james 'its for the best i'd better get going i dont wanna miss the train' 'What your not even gonna tell her to her face hows she gonna no' questioned charlie 'you and james are gonna tell her' was matts relpy 'Matt i cant believe you want me and charlie to do that the least you can do for her is tell her to her face' 'im going and thats final cya guys tell her im really sorry and that ill ring tonight' 'Matt you cant go it isnt fair on any of us. where are you going' asked james 'im going to stop at a mates'
*2 hours later* 'What he cant have left he would have told me charlie your lying matt wouldnt do that' 'susan im sorry but charlie isnt lying' *charlie leaves the room* 'but but.........' 'matt said he will ring you tonight' 'but james why did he leave what did i do wrong' 'you haven't done anything wrong' 'but what am i gonna do without him' 'well for now we're gonna go to school maybe that will take your mind off things' 'but what about our baby i cant keep it without him' 'come on susan we're goin to school we will talk about it tonight when we get home'
~at school~ 'Susan i said what are the mistakes that you found in the passage' 'erm' 'come on we are waiting' 'i didnt find any miss' 'did you even look at the passage' 'erm no miss' 'and why not' 'BECAUSE I HAVE MORE IMPORTANT THINGS TO BE THINKING ABOUT' 'RIGHT GET OUT' 'GLADLY' ~out side~ 'hey what are you doing out here' came the freindly voice of james 'i got sent out' 'awww why what happened' 'i shouted at miss and said i had more impotant things to be doin' 'oh' 'James what do you think your doing i thought i told you to go straigt home' came the angry voice of mr greden 'er i was just going sir' ' i should think you were' 'why you gotta go home' questioned susan 'mums been taken into hospital' 'oh james im so sorry' 'its ok' 'do you want me to come with you' 'if you want but wont you get in more trouble' 'yeah but i dont care i need yo get away from this place'
~at the hospital~ 'cya in a bit james i hope your mums ok' 'yeah cya susan. what you gonna do are you gonna go home' 'no im gonna hang round here for a bit' 'oh ok'
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 18, 2004 17:39:19 GMT -5
*an hour later* 'hey susan shes gonna be ok there letting her go tomorrow' 'oh james thats great news. come her and let me give you a hug' 'anyway do u wanna get going you've been waiting here for ages' 'yeah ok' just as they were leaving an ambulance pulled up outside 'i wonder who that is in the ambulance' said james 'yeah so do i. i think we had better wait here until they've bought the person in' 'yeah good idea suzie'
the paramedics carried the stretcher into the hospital a look of horror fell across susans face 'omg james thats matt' 'it cant be he's at his mates' 'james i no who i saw and it was matt' *susan runs after the paramedics* 'SUSAN COME BACK' shouted james
'whats happened 2 him' asked susan 'erm sorry who r u' asked the paramedic 'im his girlfrend' 'oh he was in a car accident the driver had had a few to drink and lost control of the car it went straight into a building and blew up, your lucky your boyfriends the only one who survived.' 'omg can i see him' 'im afraid not hes in intensive care you can come and see him as soon as hes ok' 'oh ok' 'you betta go. hang on what are you doing here your suppose to be at school.' 'i came here with a friend for support when he went to see his mum' 'oh well get back to skool you dont want to get in trouble' 'im in enough as it is so what does it matter' muttered susan
'susan was it matt' asked james 'yeah he was in a car accident' 'im guessing u dont wanna go back to school' 'no but ive got to my mum will kill me if i get in anymore trouble.'
~back at school~ 'susan you have been in enough trouble this term i think the best thing to do is suspend you for a few weeks. maybe then you can come back and be more like yourself it is so unlike you to be causing so much trouble' said mrs hester the head of the school 'oh you dont no the real susan then' said her mum 'are you having any problems at home' questioned mrs 'what do you take me for are you trying to say i cant look after my own child' 'no its just normally students that cause problems have problems at home' 'well im not the problem she is i dont no whats got into her i bet its that boyfriend of hers' replyed susan mum *susan gets up and walks out the room*
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 18, 2004 17:39:38 GMT -5
'oi come back here you wernt told to go' yelled susan's mum 'i dont have to listen to you going on about matt hes finished with me and been in a car accident HAPPY NOW' 'but that doesnt explain the past two weeks' said mrs 'ok i found out i was pregnant with matts kid im gonna get rid of it thats why ive been acting strange' 'but but wen did you, you no with him' asked susan's mum 'i dont wanna talk about it' 'you cum back and sit on that chair' said her mum 'i dont have to do what you tell me im going home bye' susan walks out the office and heads for the exit 'is it true your pregnant wiv matts kid and that hes left you and beenn in a car accident' asked a fellow student 'just shut up' 'is it true' 'just shut up' 'Is it true' 'I SED JUST SHUT UP' *smack* 'there was no need 4 that i was only askin u' said the student 'well in future dont ask' ~phone rings~ 'hello is this susan' 'yeah why whos asking' 'we are calling on behalf of mathew willis' mother' 'oh' 'shes asked us to tell you that your never to go anywhere near matt again' 'can you pass a message on from me i dont care what she says im still gonna see him'
susan wlked out the skool gates and started heading for home it was wrong everything was wrong what did she do wrong? why did matt leave? why was he in the car wen he knew the driver had been drinkin? why was it him that was in hospital and not her? everyone would miss matt if any thing happened to him but no one would notice if it was her. 'theres no point in me going home im not wanted' muttered susan 'the only person that ever wanted me was matt but now he doesnt, why does everyone hate me so much
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 18, 2004 17:39:56 GMT -5
~2 weeks later~
'susan where are you' came the worried voice of james from the other end of the phone 'im stopping with my dad' 'but doesnt your dad live the other side of the world' 'that exagerating a bit but he does live quite a distance from where i use to live' 'why did u leave i miss you sooo much and so does matt he even ran away from home so his mum cant stop him seeing you' 'i left because i couldnt cope with it all no one wanted me around they all hated me because it was matt in hospital and not me' 'not everyone hated you i didnt.....' 'wow one person didnt hate me' 'matt didnt either' 'he had a funny way of showing it' 'the reason he left is because he said he'd done something awful and didnt want to hurt you' 'anyway if you missed me as much as you say you do why have you only just phoned me' 'we were told not to cantact you by the police' 'but why the police' 'your mum reported you missing' 'james im sorry but ive got to go' 'but.....' 'ill ring you i promise' 'but.....' james i really miss you to you no but i dont no if i can ever go back home' 'but matt needs you he's so depressed' 'james im really sorry but ive really got to go' 'ok talk to you when you ring' 'bye james' *she hangs up*
'hey hunny how r u' came the cheery voice of susan's dad 'im fine dad. how was work?' 'as dull as usual. you no its really nice having you back luking after my little girl like i always wanted to' *susans phone rings* 'sorry dad ive got to answer it' 'ok' ~susan walks to her room and locks the door~ 'hello is this susan' came the scared voice of matt 'yeah it is' 'susan i really need you please come back home' 'matt i cant' 'please ill explain everything ill understand if you hate me but please let me tell you evrything to your face'
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 18, 2004 17:40:33 GMT -5
'james i really really really miss her i really want her back' said matt 'i miss her to but we cant make her come back if she dont want to any way where will she stay her mum dont want her back and your mum wont let her anywhere close your house' 'i really need to talk to her james' 'well talk away then matt' said susan 'susan what are you doing here' asked matt 'you said you needed to talk to me so im here for you to talk 2 me so can you get it over and done with' 'james im gonna have to go talk soon' matt hung up on james 'rite well wot do u want to no' 'why you left me and all that' 'like i said your probably gonna hate me but ill tell you everything you no the night i went down the pub with my mates and didnt come home till 4 in the morning well this bird started chatting me up so i went along with it as ok joke at first but then after a few more drinks it started getting serious at about 12 she took me back to her place i was completely out of my head so i had no idea what i was doing. i slept with her then i came home at 4 and got into bed with you' 'have you ever seen this bird since' asked susan 'well yeah i couldnt exactly miss her she's in most of my lessons at school' 'hang on so you knew her before' asked susan 'yeah but i havent finished telling you everything. miss tampton put us into groups of three and she put me with her' 'whats her name' demanded susan 'sasha' 'oh my god matt dont tell me your the father of the kid she's been boasting about' 'well yeah i am she decided to tell me in that lesson' 'and you met me that night and didnt mention it' 'yeah i didnt no how to' 'but you still havent explained why you left' 'she started taunting me with it she would never shut up about it and she said if i didn't leave you she was going to tell everyone i couldnt bare for you to find out that way so i told her i had finished with you but she found out that i hadnt so she started threatening to tell everyone so i spoke to james and charlie about finishing with you. they thought i was mental but i'd decided i was gonna leave so she coudln't mess with my head anymore than she had done. i rang her up and told her i had actually finished with you but she didnt stop there she said i had no reason not to see her i told her i never wanted to see her again and that i wished the baby died. i was really confussed about everything i really loved you but i'd betrayed you and you had no idea. i met my mate in town we had a few drinks then he was gonna drive me to his house to drop my stuff off then we were gonna go back to town but it didnt work out that way jon lost control of the car and we went into a building. Jon died i was taken to hospital. i was still partly concious and i heard your voice i really wanted to talk to you but i couldn't. when i came out of hospital id found out what my mum had said. i went round to your house and your mum nearly killed me and she told me you'd left and she had no idea where you were she said it was all my fault. i sat in the park for a few hours then james came down park wiv hannah he saw me sitting there so he asked what had happened. i told him everything. i asked where you had gone but he didnt no either. later that night when i was at home the police came round asking wether i'd seen you. i told them i hadnt then asked if they wanted me to ring you but they said i wasn't allowed incase i made things worse. you rang your mum the other night to tell her you were stopping with your dad. she told the police as soon as id found out we were allowed to contact you i rang but your phone was engaged'
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 18, 2004 17:40:53 GMT -5
'i was on the phone to james' 'i rang you later on and well you no everything after that.' 'james told me you had tryed to run away' 'i did but it didnt work the police were following me because your mum had said i'd had something to do with it. i went home and had a shower i sat in my room thinking things through thinking about how stupid i'd been. i saw the pain killers on my bedside table i sat there looking at them and this voice in my head told me to take and overdose so i did' 'you did wot' snapped susan 'i took an overdose. my mum realised i'd been in my room for a while so she came to check on me there i was lying on the floor i was taken into hospital and they sorted everything out. i really missed you and i would have rather died than not be with you i loved you so much. ' i loved you to matt but i didnt no what was going on you no when you were in hospital everyone was really depressed and said they wished it was me there and not you everyone hated me they said it was my fault you were in there. thats one of the reasons i left.' 'what was the other reason' asked matt 'id been in loads of trouble at skool as you new i got kicked out off a lesson so i skived off the rest of the morning and part of the afternoon. when i got back i told them id been to a dentist appointment but they had alredy been on the phone to my mum. i got called to the office and they kept questioning me on why id suddenly started causing trouble in the end i had to tell them about me being pregnant i walkd out the office and left home.so basically my mum had been giving me a hard time and on top of everything else it got to much so i left' 'are you really mad at me' asked matt 'yeah but i forgive you we have both been through a really bad time' 'MATHEW WILLIS WHATt DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING TALKING TO THAT FILTH' shouted matts mum 'mum she isnt filth' replyed matt 'yes she is after everything shes put you through'was his mums reply 'mum trust me shes been through worse than me' 'oh has she been softening you up with some sad story of why her mum doesnt want her' snapped matts mum 'mum shut up and leave me alone' 'dont you talk to me like that. i bet you've got that from HER as well haven't you' 'NO I HAVEN'T' 'MATT GO HOME' yelled his mum 'i can't' 'why not' 'because i need to sort out what me and susan are going to do about our baby' 'but i thought sasha was the one that was pregnant' said his mum puzzled 'she is but so is susan and i dont want sasha's child i want susan's'
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 18, 2004 17:41:13 GMT -5
plz tell me wot u fink
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Post by Kolakube on Dec 19, 2004 9:45:54 GMT -5
Uh ................... please please please, If you're going to write fics, write them in proper english. It's quite difficult to read, you haven't put who's saying what.
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Post by suzie on Dec 19, 2004 9:46:58 GMT -5
ok ok i will next time i cum on here logged in
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 23, 2004 17:34:43 GMT -5
is that better
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Dec 26, 2004 17:40:43 GMT -5
plssss continue the fic is great
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Post by suzie on Dec 26, 2004 18:09:50 GMT -5
ok i will when i have time
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Post by Xx Chalkie xX on Jan 3, 2005 16:27:28 GMT -5
Wow, it's like a play , ya no cos its a running diologue (I think i spelt that right, lol) It's brilliant and i can't ait to see what happens. Keep it up! Luv Chalkie xx
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Jan 10, 2005 18:05:52 GMT -5
thanks im slowly writing some more ill post it at soon as ive done promise
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