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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Sept 22, 2004 11:17:04 GMT -5
'Ill leave u 2 2 tlk' 'ok cya james' 'susan i dont think we can get bk 2gether' 'wot do u meen danny' 'we can stay m8s but we cant get bk 2gether' 'oh ok then danny if thats wot u want' 'it isnt but i know u and dougie will be happy together' 'ya wot' butted in dougie 'well i guessed that wen susan phone was switched off when i rang summut was happenin in the bedroom because thats wot she use to do wen she was wiv me' 'oh danny im sorry' 'its ok were still m8s and thats all that matters anyway i betta get bk harry and tom want me to help um get the stuff on the tour bus 4 our tour' 'oh god i 4got it started 2nite' 'susan do u wanna tag along' 'course i will danny anyfin 4 a m8' 'oh and just a word of warnin james is gonna be there and u'll probably be nxt 2 him' 'oh gr8' 'anyway i leave u and dougie to do wot u like 4 the day but just dont be l8 2nite' 'rite ok then cya danny' 'bi'
'so wot u wanna do 4 the day' 'well ill need sumfin to wear 2nite' 'ok to the shops we go'
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Nov 11, 2004 9:53:31 GMT -5
its great!!! pls continue ;D
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Nov 18, 2004 13:59:21 GMT -5
'omg i told him not 2 be late' 'soz guyz susan needed me to help her wiv her hair' 'oh ok then' 'is she alright i mean with havin 2 sit next to james'
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Post by christina on Nov 20, 2004 5:00:53 GMT -5
good!!
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Nov 20, 2004 5:03:28 GMT -5
i wrote the last message btw... lol. it s really good
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Nov 20, 2004 15:57:08 GMT -5
lol thanx ill write sum more but im havin truble with writin it
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Post by chaslee7 on Dec 22, 2004 2:43:12 GMT -5
oh, c'mon pleez continue
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Dec 22, 2004 12:22:52 GMT -5
yeah..btw chalsee i have some trouble writing my fic too... i dont know how i'm gonna continue lol
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 22, 2004 16:50:29 GMT -5
ok ok its not much but its all i can do at the moment
that night "Where's dougie got to i thought i told him not to be late." 'Im here sorry guys but the car broke down' 'oh ok wheres susan and is she ok sittin nxt to james' 'shes just at the loo i think shes ok about it she hasnt really mentioned tonight'
*in the audience* 'susan you lookk so nice' said a drooling james 'put your tongue back in i dont want your spit all over me' 'but' 'james just leave me alone' 'hey james whos this lovly young lady your tlkin to' 'this is susan you know the one i used to be with' 'oh by the way do u want any drinks' 'yeah ill have my normal cheers matt' 'susan do you want anything' 'no im ok' 'ok james ill bring yours over then we can all talk'
'so how are things between you and danny and dougie' 'me and danny are mates and me and dougie are seeing each other' 'What so you can be mates with danny but not me' 'yeah because danny never did wot you did'
*matt comes back with the drinks* 'Whats all the shouting about' 'nothing it dosent matter' 'anyway james get that down ya'
*after a few more drinks james and susan calm down' 'so me and dougie went back to his place and his mum was like omg wot the hell' 'why what happened' 'we both fell through the door' 'right did you have that many to drink' 'probably i lost count' 'lol girls' 'wots that supose to mean' said susan gently hitting james 'it dont matter' 'hey you to seem very close' 'do we' said a shocked james
*bk on stage* 'dude shes amazin and i cant believe you got that girl' dougie is scanning the audience looking for susan to see if she was ok. then he spotted james he looked round him for susan but she wernt there dougie ran off stage 'Dude where ya goin we need you' 'sorry danny but i need to do something dougie runs up to james 'WOT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONE TO HER' 'i aint done nufin' 'WELL WHERE IS SHE' ' i dunno' dougie hits james then goes to the loos 'susan are you in here' 'dougie' came the tearful voice of susan 'wot are you doing in here its the females loos' 'i came to find you open the door and tell me whats happened' susan opens the door and dougie runs and hugs her 'so whatt happened' 'he' 'dont tell me he tried it on' 'yeah' 'im gonna kill him i new i shouldnt have let him sit near you'
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Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Dec 22, 2004 16:54:20 GMT -5
'dougie its kinda my fault ive had a few to many to drink' 'but thats no excuse for him to do what he did' 'dougie im gonna get a cab home ill see you when you get back off tour' 'but i was gonna take you on tour with me' 'i need to sort out my head ill ring you every night' 'but it won't be the same' 'im sorry dougie but i need to sort my head out. promise me you will tell danny im sorry aswell' 'tell me ur sorry for whatt' 'danny' 'thats me' 'im not coming on tour with you guys' 'why not, james didnt do anyfin to you did he?' there is a silence then two girls walk into the loos and run out screaming. whilst the lads are suprised about the girls susan takes the opertunity to run out the loos danny and dougie only notice when they turn to talk to her 'danny where is she' 'how am i supose to know shes your girlfriend' dougie runs out the loos leaving danny standing there. danny looks round the girls loo and is suprised at how much cleaner they are than the gents. he checks his hair in the mirror and runs after dougie.
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Dec 23, 2004 12:00:55 GMT -5
it's great!! ;D
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Post by suzie on Dec 31, 2004 18:49:11 GMT -5
thanx
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