Post by SuZiE-jO-bEe on Mar 23, 2004 17:09:21 GMT -5
here is a story me and denz have started writin on our website Character: Susan Deni Jeni James Matt Charlie and Danny
Part 1:
Susan, Deni and Danny, Susans boyfriend were all best mates and shared a nice little flat in london, they got the flat when they left school, Danny, was in a band, his band were McFly and they had just been signed, they were having a party to celebrate.
At the party there was loads of people, most of them Susan and Deni knew from school, some were Danny's and the other members of McFly, Dougie, Tom and Harry's family and friends, Then Danny came bounding over to us greeting Susan with a kiss.
''Guys, this is my girlfriend, Susan and my best friend Deni.''
Susan, and Deni froze, it was Busted! They were huge, one of the best bands around, Deni and Susan's fave band.
''Hey'' Deni said, although it was a miricle anyone heard it.
''So, you must be the lovley Denz then?'' Matt chirped.
''Um... yeah thats me!' I said trying to act cool infront of them, i didn't want to seem like some obsessed fan. Then i said hi to Charlie and James, who was talking and laughing with Susan, who had a big grin spread across her face. Then James went off somewhere with Tom and Susan came to chat with me and Matt.
''You seem to be getting on pretty well with JB!'' Matt said, I laughed.
''Yeah, you like James alot don't ya?''
Susan gave Deni a shocked look, ''What is that supposed to mean?''
''Nothing, i just know how much you 'love' James!''
''Yeah...'' laughed Susan ''And i know how much you 'love' Matt''
Susan and Deni were having fun, and were quite drunk, talking to Charlie's girlfriend, Jeni, and the subject of James came up again...
''He's soooo sweet!'' Susan cooed
''Yeah i know, but Matt is hella funny, and can you belive just how tall Charlie really is? He's really lovley, and Matt is sooo fit...''
''Did someone say my name?'' Matt said as he came walking over.
''Umm...'' Deni looked at her feet.
''Jeni babeeeey!!!'' Everyone coverd thier ears as Charlie came running over, nearly tripping over his own feet as he did.
''Hey babes!'' Jeni laughed as a drunken Charlie tugged at her hand to come dance with him.
''So... you wanna dance?''
Deni spun round to see Matt grinning at her... she found herself going into a daydream as froze and stared into his big brown eyes, all kinds of things were running through her head. Was this real? Was Matt Willis... from busted asking her to dance?
''Erm... Denz?''
''Oh, yeah, i'd love too!''
''C'mon then'' Matt laughed as he grabbed her hand and they dissapeard leaving Susan on her own with James again... Danny was nowhere to be seen...
James takes Susan for a dance and at the end he kisses Her just as Danny walks in.
''What the hell?'' Screamed Danny ''Get off her!''
''Danny mate i'm sorry, i just got a bit carried away thats all, it didn't mean anything, i swear!'' James continued to reason with him but he was having none of it. ''James just get out now!''
James left, Susan watched, he looked back and mumbled a ''sorry'' as he went out the door.
''What the hell was that Susan? Why did he kiss you, did he hurt you...?''
''NO! Of course he didn't hurt me, he wouldn't do that, we were just drunk that's all, it meant nothing, can't we just forget about it?''
''I suppose so, come on, you're staying with me for the rest of the party!''
Susan sighed and followed Danny, pretending to have fun... while she was really thinking about James, and how wonderful the kiss was, the way he danced with her, the way his eyes glistend in the light, his sweet sounding voice, his shiny blonde hair... then she realised, that she was in love with James, she couldn't help it, there was just something about him that was special, but, what about Danny, she couldn't leave him for James, and what if James didn't want her anyway? Before she knew it, the party was over and everyone had gone home, Susan was too busy thinking about James to notice...
In the end Danny grabs Susan's hand and pulls her out and says '' You seem like your off with the fairys what you thinkin 'bout?''
''What? I was just...er... thinking about what a great party it was babe.''
''Oh... right, well everyones gone home now so we can... go to bed now eh?'' Danny gave Susan a cheeky grin
''Hmm?'' Susan looked up at Danny who just grabbed he by the arm and lead her into the bedroom...
Danny went 2 the loo and Susan ran out the house 2 James' flat James says wots up Susan and Susan says i cant stop thinkin bout u and the kiss and i think Dannys tryin 2 compete against u
''Well...'' James said, 'It's up to you, you can't have both of us..''
And Susan says "But i don't know which one of you to choose!''
James says "well who do you have the most feelings for?
''Well... you James, but i can't leave Danny he will be heartbroken, what will people think, what will Deni say? And what about your friendship with Danny?''
''Yeah but you can't stay wiv him if u dont have feelings for him"
Susan says "But i do still have feelings for him just since the party i've had them for you aswell"
"Well how about i stay away from you for a bit then maybe your feelings forme wont be so strong"
So James moves away
~One week later~
''What do you mean, your moving out?'' Susan shouted at Danny whilst crying
''I have too move 'cos of the band, i need to be with the others all the time!''
''But Charlie lives with Jeni...''
''Yeah, and look at all the hassle she gets!''
''I don't care Danny''
''But, we've bought the house now, i have too move, i'll see you at the weekend, ok?''
''Don't bother!''
''What?''
''Just p**s off Danny, were finished!''
''But... Susan''
''No buts, now go! Go off with your little bandmates, bye!'' Susan pushed Danny out of the door with his bags and slammed it shut, leaned against it in floods of tears, she got her mobile from her pocket and phoned James
~James's flat~
''Hello?'' James yawned
''J..James...''
''Susan...?''
''Me and Danny broke up'' Susan mumbled
''What... why did he do something...?''
''He moved in with the other boys, we had a row and i told him it was over.''
''Oh, are you ok?''
''Not really, i'm alone since Deni went shopping with Matt...''
''Wait there, i'll be over in five!'' James hung up, checked his hair in the mirror, grabbed his keys and left.
*knock knock*
''Thanks for coming''
''No problem... hey don't cry'' James pulled Susan into a hug, he whisperd into her ear, ''It's gonna be ok'' Susan pulled away from James and led him into the kitchen.
''You wanna coke?'' She asked
''Er... yes please'' James smiled
Susan handed James the coke can and they sat down to watch friends, laughing every so often, Susan lent against James chest and fell asleep. James then also fell asleep.
''Thanks Matt'' Deni said as Matt carried her bags in the flat for her.
''No problem, so... erm... do you wanna meet up again tomorrow?''
''Sure, i think you better go, those fans are coming!''
''Oh god yeah, see ya tomorrow'' Matt waved and got in his car and drove off, Deni really liked Matt, but she was sure he didn't feel the same way. Deni started to walk to her room, when something caught her eye, it was Susan and James, on the sofa asleep, cuddled up to each other, she then walked to Susan's room and open the door to find Danny's stuff all gone. She didn't know what to think of it, then she walked back to the lounge again, and what she figured in her head was Susan must've been having an affair... with James and that Danny had walked out.
''Mhh..''
''Get up''
''Wha?''
''James... what the hell is going on?''
''Oh, i must've fell asleep!'' James gently pushed Susan off him and got up, looking embarresed, Susan then opened her eyes.
''Oh... hey Deni, when did you...''
''What's going on? where's Danny? Why is James here?''
''Danny left me'' Susan looked down.
''He what? Why?... Oh because you have been seeing James behind his back have you?''
''No way! Danny left to move in with his bandmates, they mean more to him than me, James come round to comfort me, thats all''
''Oh...'' Deni sat down on the sofa next to Susan and hugged her, she couldn't think of anything to say.
there was an awkward silence then susan said so how r things going between u and matt and deni says 'i dunno i really like him but i dont think he likes me'
'im sure he does'
then Susan gets a phone call its Danny. Susan answered and danny started sayin how much he wanted 2 be with her and how much he missed her. Susan just sat there not sayin a word Danny started shoutin down the phone 'Susan u alrite y arent u answerin ur not seein sum1 else r u'. Susan luked across the room at James and just burst into tears with that Danny sed 'rite im cummin ova i wanna no wots goin on and where i stand'
*knock knock*
'Susan its me Danny let me in' Susan slowly wlked 2 the door and opened it Danny stood there starin at Susan then he broke down into tears
Part 1:
Susan, Deni and Danny, Susans boyfriend were all best mates and shared a nice little flat in london, they got the flat when they left school, Danny, was in a band, his band were McFly and they had just been signed, they were having a party to celebrate.
At the party there was loads of people, most of them Susan and Deni knew from school, some were Danny's and the other members of McFly, Dougie, Tom and Harry's family and friends, Then Danny came bounding over to us greeting Susan with a kiss.
''Guys, this is my girlfriend, Susan and my best friend Deni.''
Susan, and Deni froze, it was Busted! They were huge, one of the best bands around, Deni and Susan's fave band.
''Hey'' Deni said, although it was a miricle anyone heard it.
''So, you must be the lovley Denz then?'' Matt chirped.
''Um... yeah thats me!' I said trying to act cool infront of them, i didn't want to seem like some obsessed fan. Then i said hi to Charlie and James, who was talking and laughing with Susan, who had a big grin spread across her face. Then James went off somewhere with Tom and Susan came to chat with me and Matt.
''You seem to be getting on pretty well with JB!'' Matt said, I laughed.
''Yeah, you like James alot don't ya?''
Susan gave Deni a shocked look, ''What is that supposed to mean?''
''Nothing, i just know how much you 'love' James!''
''Yeah...'' laughed Susan ''And i know how much you 'love' Matt''
Susan and Deni were having fun, and were quite drunk, talking to Charlie's girlfriend, Jeni, and the subject of James came up again...
''He's soooo sweet!'' Susan cooed
''Yeah i know, but Matt is hella funny, and can you belive just how tall Charlie really is? He's really lovley, and Matt is sooo fit...''
''Did someone say my name?'' Matt said as he came walking over.
''Umm...'' Deni looked at her feet.
''Jeni babeeeey!!!'' Everyone coverd thier ears as Charlie came running over, nearly tripping over his own feet as he did.
''Hey babes!'' Jeni laughed as a drunken Charlie tugged at her hand to come dance with him.
''So... you wanna dance?''
Deni spun round to see Matt grinning at her... she found herself going into a daydream as froze and stared into his big brown eyes, all kinds of things were running through her head. Was this real? Was Matt Willis... from busted asking her to dance?
''Erm... Denz?''
''Oh, yeah, i'd love too!''
''C'mon then'' Matt laughed as he grabbed her hand and they dissapeard leaving Susan on her own with James again... Danny was nowhere to be seen...
James takes Susan for a dance and at the end he kisses Her just as Danny walks in.
''What the hell?'' Screamed Danny ''Get off her!''
''Danny mate i'm sorry, i just got a bit carried away thats all, it didn't mean anything, i swear!'' James continued to reason with him but he was having none of it. ''James just get out now!''
James left, Susan watched, he looked back and mumbled a ''sorry'' as he went out the door.
''What the hell was that Susan? Why did he kiss you, did he hurt you...?''
''NO! Of course he didn't hurt me, he wouldn't do that, we were just drunk that's all, it meant nothing, can't we just forget about it?''
''I suppose so, come on, you're staying with me for the rest of the party!''
Susan sighed and followed Danny, pretending to have fun... while she was really thinking about James, and how wonderful the kiss was, the way he danced with her, the way his eyes glistend in the light, his sweet sounding voice, his shiny blonde hair... then she realised, that she was in love with James, she couldn't help it, there was just something about him that was special, but, what about Danny, she couldn't leave him for James, and what if James didn't want her anyway? Before she knew it, the party was over and everyone had gone home, Susan was too busy thinking about James to notice...
In the end Danny grabs Susan's hand and pulls her out and says '' You seem like your off with the fairys what you thinkin 'bout?''
''What? I was just...er... thinking about what a great party it was babe.''
''Oh... right, well everyones gone home now so we can... go to bed now eh?'' Danny gave Susan a cheeky grin
''Hmm?'' Susan looked up at Danny who just grabbed he by the arm and lead her into the bedroom...
Danny went 2 the loo and Susan ran out the house 2 James' flat James says wots up Susan and Susan says i cant stop thinkin bout u and the kiss and i think Dannys tryin 2 compete against u
''Well...'' James said, 'It's up to you, you can't have both of us..''
And Susan says "But i don't know which one of you to choose!''
James says "well who do you have the most feelings for?
''Well... you James, but i can't leave Danny he will be heartbroken, what will people think, what will Deni say? And what about your friendship with Danny?''
''Yeah but you can't stay wiv him if u dont have feelings for him"
Susan says "But i do still have feelings for him just since the party i've had them for you aswell"
"Well how about i stay away from you for a bit then maybe your feelings forme wont be so strong"
So James moves away
~One week later~
''What do you mean, your moving out?'' Susan shouted at Danny whilst crying
''I have too move 'cos of the band, i need to be with the others all the time!''
''But Charlie lives with Jeni...''
''Yeah, and look at all the hassle she gets!''
''I don't care Danny''
''But, we've bought the house now, i have too move, i'll see you at the weekend, ok?''
''Don't bother!''
''What?''
''Just p**s off Danny, were finished!''
''But... Susan''
''No buts, now go! Go off with your little bandmates, bye!'' Susan pushed Danny out of the door with his bags and slammed it shut, leaned against it in floods of tears, she got her mobile from her pocket and phoned James
~James's flat~
''Hello?'' James yawned
''J..James...''
''Susan...?''
''Me and Danny broke up'' Susan mumbled
''What... why did he do something...?''
''He moved in with the other boys, we had a row and i told him it was over.''
''Oh, are you ok?''
''Not really, i'm alone since Deni went shopping with Matt...''
''Wait there, i'll be over in five!'' James hung up, checked his hair in the mirror, grabbed his keys and left.
*knock knock*
''Thanks for coming''
''No problem... hey don't cry'' James pulled Susan into a hug, he whisperd into her ear, ''It's gonna be ok'' Susan pulled away from James and led him into the kitchen.
''You wanna coke?'' She asked
''Er... yes please'' James smiled
Susan handed James the coke can and they sat down to watch friends, laughing every so often, Susan lent against James chest and fell asleep. James then also fell asleep.
''Thanks Matt'' Deni said as Matt carried her bags in the flat for her.
''No problem, so... erm... do you wanna meet up again tomorrow?''
''Sure, i think you better go, those fans are coming!''
''Oh god yeah, see ya tomorrow'' Matt waved and got in his car and drove off, Deni really liked Matt, but she was sure he didn't feel the same way. Deni started to walk to her room, when something caught her eye, it was Susan and James, on the sofa asleep, cuddled up to each other, she then walked to Susan's room and open the door to find Danny's stuff all gone. She didn't know what to think of it, then she walked back to the lounge again, and what she figured in her head was Susan must've been having an affair... with James and that Danny had walked out.
''Mhh..''
''Get up''
''Wha?''
''James... what the hell is going on?''
''Oh, i must've fell asleep!'' James gently pushed Susan off him and got up, looking embarresed, Susan then opened her eyes.
''Oh... hey Deni, when did you...''
''What's going on? where's Danny? Why is James here?''
''Danny left me'' Susan looked down.
''He what? Why?... Oh because you have been seeing James behind his back have you?''
''No way! Danny left to move in with his bandmates, they mean more to him than me, James come round to comfort me, thats all''
''Oh...'' Deni sat down on the sofa next to Susan and hugged her, she couldn't think of anything to say.
there was an awkward silence then susan said so how r things going between u and matt and deni says 'i dunno i really like him but i dont think he likes me'
'im sure he does'
then Susan gets a phone call its Danny. Susan answered and danny started sayin how much he wanted 2 be with her and how much he missed her. Susan just sat there not sayin a word Danny started shoutin down the phone 'Susan u alrite y arent u answerin ur not seein sum1 else r u'. Susan luked across the room at James and just burst into tears with that Danny sed 'rite im cummin ova i wanna no wots goin on and where i stand'
*knock knock*
'Susan its me Danny let me in' Susan slowly wlked 2 the door and opened it Danny stood there starin at Susan then he broke down into tears
