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Post by Bitch*Goddess on May 8, 2004 5:26:59 GMT -5
Hey I'm Carly. I got bored and so attempted to write a fanfic. I'm still in the process of completing it but i thought i'd post up what I've got so I can see if I'm a bad a writer as I think I am. Lemme know what you think as I post up each part. Here ya go... It's called, *Things will never be the same again*
James Bourne had been my best friend for as long as I could remember, which was all my life. I remember everything that happens to me, good or bad. For instance, I remember that my parents died when I was just 11 months old. Ever since then I was put into the care of James’ mum and dad who I, from then on, regarded as my own parents. We were always so close; James and I. Just like siblings, except we were closer, and the parents always thought we were “courting” as they called it. To everyone else who heard about this, they thought it was weird because everyone knew us to be brother and sister. Only the people, who had to know, knew the real truth. So whatever rumours about incest went around, we didn’t care, they were too low to try to get to know us to learn differently so all the bullying went right over our heads and we got on with life our way. If I were ever to fall out with James, he could seriously damage me. He knew A LOT about me. He’d seen me naked a lot when we were younger and as we got older and our bodies developed, not a lot changed apart from I now wore bras and thongs he walked around in boxers. If anything scared me or I got worried about anything, we slept in the same bed at night and he would comfort me. In James’ arms was where I felt safest. I saw his arms and big iron bars that could protect me from evil and no one could understand me but him. I’d only ever cried to James before, I didn’t like other people seeing me in moments of weakness. I always thought they would jeer and it would make the situation worse so he was my rock, as they say. He kept me strong and brought me up when I was down. He made me laugh when I had a face of death and he never let anything or anyone hurt me. He was very protective of me.
-Carly xXx
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Post by Bitch*Goddess on May 8, 2004 5:35:35 GMT -5
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It was very cold that night in winter one year when I had come out of an after school detention. James had arranged to meet me so that I didn’t have to walk home on my own in the dark, he knew I got creeped out easily. As I was walking out of the school gates, my phone beeped that I had a text. I opened it and it was from James saying
“Hey Babe, I can’t walk you home tonight. Mums really ill and I have to stay with her. Really sorry. Cya soon. James X”
“Oh great” I thought. It’s not that I was terribly scared of things that go bump in the night but I’m not keen on how far we live from school considering all the alleys I have to go through to get home. I got out my CD player from in my bag and put in a Blink CD whilst standing under a streetlight. I pressed play and began the trek home. I thought that if I had my music on, the time would pass quicker as I was singing to myself. I hadn’t even considered that someone could creep up behind me and grab me and because I had my earphones in I wouldn’t be able to hear anything. A strong hand grabbed my arm and pulled me round backwards. A sudden blow to the face shocked me and I fell back. My mind sinking into complete darkness. I couldn’t have been out for long but when I came round I had no idea where I was. I looked around me and I noticed that I was slumped against a building and there was a park nearby and a long line of trees. I realised I was in the local recreation grounds sat against the pavilion.
-Carly xXx
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Post by KimBob on May 8, 2004 12:04:48 GMT -5
I think, even now with my ill head, that this is going to be a brilliant fic. Honestly.
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Post by Kolakube on May 8, 2004 13:31:44 GMT -5
hehehe, tis really cool so far, but I swear, If it turns out like my new one, I'LL F*****G KILL YOU!!! ;D Only joshing, I trust you O sacred person who knows all the storylines to my fanfics before i even write them ;D ;D, honestly peeps that's what 50mins of Maths does, 4 times a week!
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Post by Bitch*Goddess on May 9, 2004 4:20:41 GMT -5
Next part peeps. And don't worry Ems, I am a worse writer than you so your fics will always beat mine! this is just for time filling! x
I was suddenly aware of a throbbing pain coming from my thighs and vagina opening. I looked down and there was blood covering all of my thighs and it was on my school skirt too. I wasn’t wearing any underwear and my shirt was torn. I burst into tears right there. I couldn’t believe I’d been so stupid. Frantically searching through my bag I found my phone, none of my physical belongings had been taken, only my one personal thing that I wanted to keep until I found the right guy had gone. I would never be a virgin again and I could never have that perfect first time with my dream guy. I dialled James’ number and it shocked me that he picked up straight away. “Oh My God, Carly where are you babe? I thought you’d be home ages ago . . . Did you go to a friends house?” “Help me James. I’m at the Rec and I don’t know how long I’ve been here. I’ve been raped, I’m covered in blood and it hurts so much, I don’t know what to do.” “Whereabouts are you? I’ll be there any minute” With that he hung up, he didn’t even wait to find out where I was. I looked at the clock on my phone. 18.47. I left school at half 4, so I had been like this for about 2 hours. I had no idea how long the actual ordeal lasted for, and I didn’t particularly want to know either. I heard James shouting my name and I screamed out for him. I didn’t have any effort to stand up, as I would have run to find him. As soon as he saw me, he dropped to his knees and wrapped his arms around me. I pulled back slightly to see tears falling down his cheeks. I leaned against his stomach and rested my head on his shoulder. He apologised over and over but I was too numb to hear his words.
-Carly xXx
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Post by KimBob on May 9, 2004 4:36:51 GMT -5
AWW!!! WRITE MORE. I DEMAND YOU TO WRITE MORE
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Post by Bitch*Goddess on May 9, 2004 4:52:20 GMT -5
I sat like that for what seemed like an eternity, but I was safe there. He pulled back slightly and started to take his jacket off. He searched for his phone and I heard him talking to his Dad. “She’s in a bad way get to the car park at the Rec as soon as she can. We’ve gotta get her checked over at the hospital.” With that he hung up. He laid the coat on the floor and picked me up and sat me over it. He cradled me in his arms, wrapped in the coat until his dad arrived, which wasn’t long. He picked me up and carried me over to the car. His dad swung open the back door and James carefully laid me down. I leaned up against the seat and James climbed in and rested my legs over his thighs, his hand slowly running up and down my leg to comfort me. I began to fall asleep. It wasn’t long until I felt the car stop and I opened my eyes to be sitting alone. The door behind me opened and James’ arms came around me and he picked me up. His dad and gone in and told them I was coming and what had happened. As soon as we were in the door a female nurse ran up to us. James spoke, as he knew I wouldn’t be able to and didn’t want to. He briefly explained that I had been walking home and obviously hit over the head as there was some blood down the side of my face and I had been raped. He said that he thought I could have lost a lot of blood by the time he found me. He was told to put me on the hospital bed in a very white sanitized room. The nurse tried to usher him out of the room but I began to cry and begged her to let him stay with me. He took hold of my hand and told me he’d never let go until everything was sorted. I trusted him and started to co-operate with what I was being told to do. James’ dad left and sat in the relative’s room, waiting for news of me. “We are going to do some tests for Sexually Transmitted Infections that you could of contracted through the rape. We will sort out the gash on your head and then we may keep you in over night, depending how your body reacts after the tests.” The nurse stated. I blankly stared up at James who looked completely lost. He has tear-stained cheeks was looking down at all the blood. I squeezed his hand and his grip tightened around mine. I realised only now just how small and helpless I must of looked because his whole hand enveloped mine and he gave a weak smile. I asked to have some painkillers and they completely knocked me out. I was asleep and ended up staying in the night. I felt nothing of the examinations but I was always aware of James near me. It was a presence I never wanted to be without.
Reviews please! -Carly xXx
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Post by Matt's_Muffin! on May 9, 2004 5:21:14 GMT -5
It is very good bt really upsetting!! I felt slightly akward reading it!! I dont know y!! Bt dont get me wrong I thought it was really good I just dont like reading about rape and stuff like that it kinda upsets me!! Bt very deep and meaningful!! ;D ;D
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Post by Bitch*Goddess on May 9, 2004 6:05:12 GMT -5
lol. sorry about that! i know it's a sour subject to read about but i thought it fit in with my plans for the rest of it! it does get better and more happy!!
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Post by Bitch*Goddess on May 9, 2004 10:15:54 GMT -5
I awoke in the morning to find James still sitting on a chair next to me, with his hand in mine and his head lying in my lap. With my other hand I reached up and began lightly running my fingers through his hair. He stirred and I stopped, aware that I’d woken him up and he probably needed rest after all I’d put him through the night before. “Don’t stop” he spoke in whispered tones while looking at me. This is how we are when we have problems; me sat at one end of the sofa, him lying down across it with his head in my lap and my fingers stroking his hair and face. It felt so natural to be like this with him and it soothed us both. “Are you OK?” he asked. “Mmmm..” I replied, not really wanting to talk about what happened. “The nurse wants to speak to you about the rape and about you pressing charges.” “How can I? I never saw any faces. Even if whoever it was, was found, I don’t want to have it spread out in court and me having to re-live it all. I just want to forget it. I feel fine now anyways. Thanks for being there for me, like always, eh?” “Yeah, you mean more to me then anyone in the world and I never wanna see you hurt ever again. Wait what are you doing??” He asked as I began pulling the wires out of me and climbed off the bed. I steadied myself on the cabinet and attempted to walk across to the door. “I feel fine. I want to go home. I hate being here. Please take me home James.” “I’ll get Dad to get the car, promise me you’ll stay here ‘till I come back for you?” “Promise.” And I sat down on the side of the bed. James ran out of the room and down the corridor to his dad. Minutes later he came back to me and asked if I felt able to walk out? I wasn’t sure so with his arm around my back and his other under my knees, he carried me out of the hospital and into the car. I was going home to safety.
Reviews please!! -Carly xXx
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Post by Matt's_Muffin! on May 9, 2004 12:32:55 GMT -5
lol. sorry about that! i know it's a sour subject to read about but i thought it fit in with my plans for the rest of it! it does get better and more happy!! Dont be sorry!! Its ur fic and it is really good!! Cant wait 2 hear the next bit!
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Post by KimBob on May 9, 2004 12:34:43 GMT -5
right, i dont have the energy to do a full review, or even a tiny review *ill*, all i have to say is keep on going like this and dont start to finish things off. also, try to keep things real, like with the girl just going out of the hospital, in real life that isnt exactually possible. please write more, i love it. im sorry, but i really dont feel well.
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Post by Matt's_Muffin! on May 9, 2004 12:38:38 GMT -5
Awwwwwww Kim *hugs* Hope u feel betta!! ;D
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Post by KimBob on May 9, 2004 12:42:12 GMT -5
no, but thanks anyway
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Post by Matt's_Muffin! on May 9, 2004 12:45:01 GMT -5
No I mean I hope u will feel betta soon!! ;D Did u hear bout McFly being sued?? OMG!!
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