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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Dec 9, 2004 9:01:32 GMT -5
hey tnx!!! ill try and continue it but now im a bit busy with school stuuff . but when i have a chance ill try to continue
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Dec 13, 2004 15:04:03 GMT -5
Chapter 6
We had a couple of more drinks and finally it was getting late... very late.
'Do you think we should return to the hotel?' matt said
we agreed. We said goodnight to the McFly and Danny smiled at me... I smiled back. We got of there and headed to the hotel.When we were almost there, a girl passed by and stopped looking at James.
'Are you James Bourne?' she said 'Yeah' 'Coool, can i have you autograph?' she smiled and looked at me and gave me one of the 'i hate you' smile. I gave a one back. 'Sure' James said and took the paper she was holding. He signed his name and gave it to her. 'Gee thanks!' and suddenly she began flirting with James and out of nowhere she leaned forward and kissed him on the lips.
the other couldn't believe their eyes. I didn't believe my eyes!! I was soo hurt. I couldnt believe what James was doing. He just stood there and did nothing while she kissed him.
'Goodnight guys' I said to Matt, Joanna, Yanika and Charlie and hurried to my hotel room.
My mind wasnt working.. My face was filled with tears... I didnt expect this from James.
I changed into my pygamas and laid on the bed.. nearly crying. Then i heard footsteps and James voice. He came into the room... changed his clothes and laid on the bed. He put his hand around my waist but i didnt turn to him. Finally I slept.
It was 10 in the morning. I was having coffee looking out of the window... thinking of what happened last night. Then suudenly James woke up.
'Good morning babe' he said sleepily. I didnt reply.
He came to me... and kissed me on the lips. I pulled away and he looked surprised.
'What's wrong?' 'You know what's wrong James' 'What?' 'You know what you did last night with that bitch' 'Oh you mean down here?' 'See you know!' I said... anger raging inside me. I took my bag and got out of the room.. slamming the door.
'Wait...' James came rishing over to me and took my hand. 'Please i didnt know what i was doing' 'You werent drunk' I went down the stairs 'Please come back' he shouted
I hurried out of the hotel almost crying. Anger raging inside me. I went in a cafeteria and ordered a cappucino. While I was drinking it... thinking of what had happened.. I heard a boy's voice.
'Hey' It was Danny 'Hi Dan' 'Are you ok?' 'Sort of' 'What do you mean?' he asked confused 'Nothing nothing' 'Look... I'm sorry of what I did last night.... I just got carried away-' 'Dont worry about it' I said... tears rolling down my face 'What happened between you and James?' he said while taking my hand. 'Can we go somwhere private where we could talk?' 'Sure lets go to my car'
He waited for me while I paid for my cappucino nd then we left to go to his car.
When we finally reached it and got into it... Danny said 'OK im listening... you can start' Tears were rolling down my face.... 'Last night... after we left...' I told him all what had happened.. leaving him mouth opened. 'James did that to you?' I nodded 'Oh god... I dont believe this' We talked in the car about this situation and then he drove me back to the hotel.
'Just stay calm' he said 'Danny.... thankyou sooo much for listening... I really really appreciate it' He looked into my eyes and i looked into his... he took my hand. I kissed him on the cheek and got out of the car.
I went back to the hotel room and sat on the bed. James wasnt there.... Then suddenly my mobile phone rang.... 'Hello?' 'Chri where are you??' Yanika said worried into the phone 'In my hotel room' 'Cya in a minute' and she hung up.
After 5 mins the door swung open and the guys appeared in the doorway
'Where were you?' Joanna said worried 'In a cafeteria' 'Chri-' James began 'We better leave you two alone' Charlie said and they got out of the room.
'Im really really sorry... I really didnt know what I was doing' 'You werent drunk James' 'Well.... I was still disappointed on what Danny did-' 'But it wasnt my fault.. you saw pull away and I explained afterwards.' ' You could have pulled away.' 'Well... i just.... wanted you to know how I felt when Danny kissed you' 'Will you forgive me?' he said. Then he kissed me.
I followed Danny's advice and forgave him.
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Dec 26, 2004 17:45:36 GMT -5
what do you think? i need some feedback
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Dec 26, 2004 18:18:30 GMT -5
Chapter 7
*Knock Knock*
James went to open the hotel room door and found Joanna, Yanika, Matt and Charlie.
'So are you back together mate?' Matt asked while Yanika and Joanna sat on the bed near me 'Yeah' James said happily 'What do you think if we ordered a dvd for tonight and tell the mcfly to come here and we'll see it together?' charlie said
James looked at me and I nodded
'So come on let's go!!' Yanika exclaimed
We headed to a dvd shop and looked through the shelves.
'What about this?' James was holding the Gone In 60seconds dvd 'James we're not into action!!' I said to him while the girls nodded.. James smiled and put it back on the shelf. 'Ooo this looks nice!' Joanna said holdong the Cinderella Story dvd. 'Ahem... we're not into cinderella stories' Matt joked 'Now this rocks!' 'I've been dying to see Mean Girls' I said excited holding the dvd 'Wow' yanika and joanna said
The boys exchanged looks...
'Okok we'll give it a try' they finally said
We paid for the dvd and headed back home. James phoned the Mcfly and came back with a happy look on his face
'It's settled!!'
The boys sat talking on James's and my bed while we girls joked around. Finally the doorbell rang and the McFly were outside the door.
We girls kissed them on the cheek each and when I came to Danny I whispered... 'Thanks soo muxh.. it worked!' 'No problem' he smiled
Then we got ready for the film and got some pop corn
'Mean girls?' Harry said in a sarcastic voice 'They're fit mate' Dougie winked
We all laughed at Dougie.. He was into fit girls!!
I sat near James and he put his hand around my waist and then he kissed me softly on the lips.
*An hour and half later*
'It was great' Tom said
We agreed. Then Matt went into the kitchen and got some vodka. We girls didn't drink but the boys got drunk
'So wanna go out with me?' Dougie told me 'Shut up Dougie!' I joked with him 'I'm serious' 'Hahaha'
Dougie grabbed me and kissed me on the lips.. then James came and jumped on him
'Hey she's mine!' 'No she's not!' 'Yes she is'
'Phew... I'm glad they're drunk' I thought
Harry had done the same as Dougie but I knew because they were drunk
Tom was doing it to Joanna and she got angry with him and Harry did it to Yanika too.
While the boys messed around... I thought... 'There's something missing...DANNY!!!' 'Where is he?'
I stood up and got out of the bedroom... and knocked on the bathroom door
'Danny are you there?' 'Christina?' Danny said while opening the door 'What's wrong?' 'Huh... nothing' 'Don't tell me nothing... why did you take so long here?' 'Is something wrong?' 'Well...' he began and looked at me. I gave him a 'continue look'. 'Well... i gave you advice how to make up with JB and it worked...I'm so happy for you 2 but still Christina I can't get enough of you' 'It's not enought being only your friend... I want more' I looked at him confused and he looked into my eyes 'Danny we can't be together...I'm with James... I like you a lot...I have feelings for you but that's just it... we can't have more' I finished
He looked disapointed and he made me feel disapointed. I hugged him tightly and he didn't let go for about a minute
'Well... atleast it's better then nothing' he said
I kissed him on the cheek in a friendly way and went back to the bedroom to join the others.
I know it's crap.... but i need some feedbacks plss
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Post by chaslee7 on Dec 26, 2004 23:47:31 GMT -5
heyya! it's great really ;D. sorry, hope this would be a great feedback for you aswell ;D. well, maybe i can give you a criticize, i mean a criticize to make you to be llooottss better, means that you're so great already . well, yeah maybe you should tell it more detail about the situation like when the busted lad met the girls and they fell in love. it seems like they so easily fell in love! i mean, maybe you could add more words to describe how could they like their fans there just to make it a bit complicated, as how the love is ;D. so...its just what it think. but really, this story is just been so great! keep on going ;D
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Jan 3, 2005 9:03:29 GMT -5
hey tnx for your advice!! i'm thinking about contunuing like this: by breaking with james for some consequences and then start a relationshiop with ........... (i'm not gonna tell! ) and things start to get a bit complicated. what do you think if i continue like that?
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Post by chaslee7 on Jan 3, 2005 23:40:26 GMT -5
well i think more complicated a stroy is, then the more interesting a story to read ;D
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Post by Christina on Jan 5, 2005 16:30:13 GMT -5
but is it good if i continue like i told u? im trying to make it a bit complicated by breaking up with james and starting a relationship with ............ and then things get a bit complicated because of james and stuff cos of breaking up.... ya know... so what do you think if i do like that?
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Post by chaslee7 on Jan 16, 2005 7:06:11 GMT -5
well, that could be one of the conflict that related to something more intense ;D
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Jan 20, 2005 14:52:30 GMT -5
Chapter 8
*About a week and half later*
Things weren't so bad after me and James made up. But one thing was worrying me. I even didn't tell my 2 friends about it. James was going out alone sometimes and he didn't even tell me were he was going. I was getting really worried.
'Im Going out' james said 'Where are you going?' 'Just going for a walk' 'See you later' he kissed my cheek and went out.
I sat on the bed.. thought were crossing my mind. what if james was lying to me. no he couldn't.. i thought...or he could? what am i gonna do? tears started rolling down my face... what if he really was lying? but as far as knew i hadn't done anything that upset him. this thing has been going since 2 days after we made up. i finally made up my mind... next time he'll do it again i'll make sure ill find out where he's going cos i couldnt take it any more. as i said.. it had been going for about a week.
then i layed on the bed... trying to read a book... but i couldnt really concentrate. then i decided to sleep cos it was getting late.
I woke up next morning to find james lying on the bed next to me. i looked at his face... he was so cute.. then i remembered of what he'd been doing recently and suddenly a tear rolled down my face and i wiped it immeaditely. i made coffee and then james woke up.
'Morning hun' 'Morning' i replied quietly and forced a fake smile
He kissed me softly on the lips and went into the bathroom. i thought about his kiss... it was so sweet.
when he was ready.. we went shopping together...
I was in the dressing room, trying on clothes when i heard james say:- 'Be right back' 'ok'
About 1hr trying on clothes (as u see... i take a long a time when i come to clothes... which ones to choose) I finally paid for the ones i liked and see him coming back with a grin on his face. Then we went to a cafateria. He took out something from his pocket and took my hand:
'Chri, I want to keep this.. so when you go back to Malta.. you'll remember me... and remember how much i loved you.' he said while he put on a beautiful silver ring into one of my fingers. 'Oh james, it s soo beautiful..' i couldn't believe my eyes, the ring was so beautiful. then i kissed him on his lips softly and smiled. still the ring didnt keep my thought about him away although i loved him like crazy.
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Jan 20, 2005 15:36:38 GMT -5
Chapter 9 :S
*That Same Night*
'Going out hun' He was doing it again. 'ok see ya'
That was it... I was already dressed... i let some time pass and then went out too. I went down the street and round the corner... still no sign of James.
About an hour later i went to walk past the park when i saw the girl that kissed James in the arms of a boy kissing him.. From the corner of my eye i tried to see who the boy was...then he looked up and saw his sapphire eyes shining in the dark... JAMES!! i think he saw me cos he let go of the girl but i didn't look at him.. i kept on walking... tears rolling down my face... now i was crying. i was right, he was lying to me the whole time. i hurried to my hotel room and ran to the bed... i was feeling sick... i had a headache. i went to sleep but tears were still rolling down my face.
*Next morning*
I opened my eyes and stood on the bed and put pillows behing my back. then james emerged from the kitchen with a cup of coffee. i didnt feel well at all... especcially of what happened last night.
'good morning babe' he said
how could he act cool when he's guilty... i just didn't know.
'are you ok?' 'no, i feel sick' 'maybe i should call the doctor' 'no!! ill be fine' 'you sure?' 'yeah' 'still you seem to remain quiet, are you sure you're gonna be ok?'
At that exact time the others came into the hotel room
'morning' they all said 'morning mates' said james 'is chri ok?' matt asked 'she s feeling a bit sick-' james began 'aww... i was thinking that we should go to the cinema today...' 'well i cant come sry' james replied
the others looked disappointed
'no you go james.. i'll stay here' i replied.... that's it.. everything was coming out.... at any time ill be crying james looked surpried.. 'no i cant leave-' 'i'm used being alone now' i said, tears rolling down my face.
yanika and joanna realized this and came near me on the bed and put their arms round me
matt and charlie looked confused at james while he stared at the floor.
'huh?' they asked him 'well... recently i thought about going for walks.. ya know....walks are good for ya' james said they looked confused and then looked at me. 'walks with that bitch... that you met down here' i said between sobs
james looked up confused and yanika and joanna looked at me.
'yes james, i saw you kissing her last night at the park' i cried
'what?!' the guys said at the same time
james just looked down
'you lied to me James! you cheated on me! how could you?!' i screamed while the others looked confused
'get out james!' i told him 'what?' 'are you deaf or something? get out!!' i said angrily 'but-'
i got out of the bed and pushed james through the door... 'guess we'll see you girls later' charlie and matt said while going out of the door totally confused. i slammed the door and sat on the bed crying. yanika and joanna comforted me a lot but i still couldn't stop crying. they stayed with me for about an hour saying sweet words and stuff. then i looked at the ring james gave me... and cried more heavily while the girls just stared at it.
then we decided to have a girls night... go to jianpula only the 3 of us. we got ready and yanika and joanna told matt and charlie what we were going to do and they understood immediately.
when we were ready the two of them kissed their boyfriends while james looked at me.. i didn't even look at his face. one thought was in my mind: he cheated on me. he tried to talk to me but i didn't even let him say a word cos i'd look the other way.
finally yanika, joanna and me where at jianpula... drinking near the bar. then i saw joanna waving and i see the mcfly coming over to us.
'where are james, charlie and matt?' tom asked 'oh.. it's just us... we decided to have a girl's night.. ya know' joanna and yanika said. i remained quiet 'are you ok christina?' dougie asked 'gotta go to the bathroom' and hurried to the ladies bathroom.
the guys looked confused
joanna and yanika sighed. 'chri and james broke up...'
the boys looked at eachother.. 'what??'
'yeah, he cheated on her...' 'o god' danny whispered 'be right back' 'where are you going mate?' harry shouted after him but danny didn't reply
i got out of the bathroom and found danny standing against the wall... i quickly wiped the tears of my face cos id been crying and went to him.
'hey' 'hey' replied 'im really sorry for what happened between you and james' he said quietly 'how do you know?' 'joanna and yanika told us' 'oh'
tears were starting to roll down my face again and danny hugged me tightly with him.
'shhhhh, it'll be ok' he said while hugging me and stroking my hair 'he- cheated- on-me' i said between cries 'everything we'll be allright you'll see'
thn i let go and looked into his blue beautiful eyes and he looked into mine. he leaned forwards and kissed me passionately... but this time i didn't let go, i replied to his kiss with pleasure, i felt so protective in his arms, i never felt this way with james, i just didn't know how i was feeling but i knew one thing: i loved danny.
ill try and continue later
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Post by chaslee7 on Jan 28, 2005 1:25:28 GMT -5
yay!!! thats sweet one with danny, and such an unpredicatble one with james! it's great....carry on pleez^^
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Feb 2, 2005 17:22:57 GMT -5
tnx!! ill continue when i have a chance cos we are starting the exams..damn
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Feb 4, 2005 12:53:15 GMT -5
Chapter 10
Then we let go of eachother and smiled.
'I love you' he whispered 'I love you too'
Then we went over the others with Danny holding me by the waist. The guys looked at him and then at me confused. We just sat down and I took a sip from my drink and then we started chattering.
Me and Danny danced to songs and stuff... I was so happy to be with him and he seemed to be happy too....
Time passed and my sadness was fading and i began to chill and have fun.
Then it was 2.30am and we decided to go the hotel. danny took me to my hotel room. we went in and james wasnt there. he decided to stay the night, then we went out of the hotel room to tell the others about it and when we came back we bumped into James coming out from a hotel room.
'What are you doing with her?' james asked danny angrily 'none of your business' i replied.
then me and danny went into the hotel room with james watching furiously.
Me and Danny kissed and things led to other things.
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Post by ilovejamessomuch on Feb 4, 2005 13:36:36 GMT -5
Chapter 11
*In The Morning*
I woke up and looked at the watch. It was 12.30am and then i found Danny beside me. He was so sweet!! I looked at him and smiled. then he woke up
'Hey' he said smiling 'Good morning sleepy head'
he started tickling me and tried to pull away cos i hate it when they tickle me, then he led go laughing
'Why on earth did you do that?!' i laughed 'for calling me a sleepy head!' then he looked into my eyes:
'remember what you said last night?' 'what?' i asked confused 'you said you love me' i looked down and blushed 'but you said it too' 'and i really meant it'
i looked at him... then i remembered what danny said to me when i found him in the bathroom... about us being more than friends and stuuf and i smiled to myself
'so do you mean it too?' he asked i looked up 'yes'
he looked relieved then he leaned forwards and kissed me again and i replied
then we got ready and went downstairs to have breakfast.
we went over the other who were at the table. there were: yanika, joanna, matt, charlie and james. james just looked at us and continued to eat his food. however the others all said 'good morning'
'so how did you sleep?' matt asked looking at danny 'great' then james got up and said 'gotta go to the bathroom' and gave me one of his looks and with that he left charlie leaned over 'james booked a new hotel room cos you kicked him out yesterday' 'he deserved it' i replied smiling of what charlie had just said 'anyway' joanna continued 'he seems so angry about you and danny together-' 'are you guys together?' yanika cut in 'duh' joanna said sarcastedly 'if not.. why did danny sleep here last night?' 'oh' 'as i was saying' joanna continued ' he is angry about it and by the way he looked at you this morning he had a 'this is not over' look
i shrugged while danny said' he doesn't have to tell her what to do, it s her own life and he doesnt have to butt in'
we finished breakfast and then me and danny decided to go around some sites around London.
we went to st.peters square and lots of another places. we took some phtos together so i can take some with me to Malta when i go back. danny got hold of my hand and smiled.
we spent the whole afternoon visiting sites around London. Sometimes fans came to Danny for his autograph and some of the girls glared at me.
We went back to the hotel at around 5pm and i went up to the hotel room while Danny phoned McFly from downstairs to tell to meet tonight in the park so we could go to a disco.
while i was in my room deciding what to wear i heard angry voices outside in the corridor. i opened the door to find James and Danny fighting
'YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO GO WITH HER! SHES MINE!' james was shouting 'NO SHES NOT!' danny replied angrily 'YOU CHEATED ON HER. HOW COULD YOU SAY YOURE STILL WITH HER?' 'stop it guys!' i shouted. then danny let go of james and came into the room and closed the door.
we got ready for tonight and met with busted (including james) and the girls. he gave danny one his looks when he's mad at someone. then we went to meet with dougie, harry and tom at the park. 'hiya guys' they said cheerily 'hey!'
we went to a very COOL disco and had fun all night apart from when James and Danny quarreled a bit.
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